{"id":962,"date":"2010-01-21T11:38:07","date_gmt":"2010-01-21T16:38:07","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.christophergronlund.com\/blog\/tjw\/?p=962"},"modified":"2010-01-21T11:38:07","modified_gmt":"2010-01-21T16:38:07","slug":"queries-that-worked-my-biggest-writing-regret","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/www.christophergronlund.com\/blog\/tjw\/2010\/01\/21\/queries-that-worked-my-biggest-writing-regret\/","title":{"rendered":"Queries that Worked: My Biggest Writing Regret"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"alignright\" src=\"http:\/\/www.christophergronlund.com\/blog\/tjw\/images\/flattire.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"250\" height=\"299\" \/>Since I had written a couple travel pieces for the <em>Dallas Morning News<\/em> and finally knew the editor on a first-name basis, I decided to send a pitch letter.<\/p>\n<p>A pitch letter <em>is<\/em> a query letter, but it&#8217;s a little different. Instead of sending a detailed query about a place you plan to write about, you send a list of places you&#8217;d like to write about and see if editors have a need for any of the ideas.<\/p>\n<p>I sent e-mail to the travel editor I&#8217;d worked with, telling him my spring travel plans. I pitched 10 places I wanted to see in Texas. Here&#8217;s what I sent:<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">*\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 *\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 *<\/p>\n<p>Dear [Editor Name],<\/p>\n<p>Last spring, I worked with you on &#8220;Highway Heroes,&#8221; an article about Texas roadside attractions. This spring, I&#8217;m planning to visit the following places; do you have a need for articles about any of these locations:<\/p>\n<p>Palo Duro Canyon &#8212; The second largest canyon in the United States.<\/p>\n<p>Caprock Canyons &#8212; The third largest state park in Texas, with a 60+ mile biking, hiking, and equestrian trail.<\/p>\n<p>McDonald Observatory &#8212; A great place to look at the night sky, in the Davis Mountains of West Texas.<\/p>\n<p>Matagorda Island &#8212; This long barrier island is the perfect way to get away from it all.<\/p>\n<p>Texas Breweries &#8212; Texas&#8217; immigrant heritage is reflected in its beers.<\/p>\n<p>Texas Vineyards &#8212; Hill Country vineyard tour.<\/p>\n<p>Monahans Sandhills State Park &#8212; Most people in the state don&#8217;t know about these seventy feet tall sand dunes in West Texas<\/p>\n<p>Enchanted Rock &#8212; Just north of Fredericksburg, Enchanted Rock is the largest pink granite dome in the United States.<\/p>\n<p>San Antonio &#8212; A 3-day weekend guide to little-known attractions, dining, and the arts in the city.<\/p>\n<p>Austin &#8211;A 3-day weekend guide to little-known attractions, dining, and the arts in the city.<\/p>\n<p>Please let me know if you would like me to cover any of these stops this spring for the <em>Dallas Morning News<\/em>.<\/p>\n<p>Sincerely,<\/p>\n<p>Christopher Gronlund<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">*\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 *\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 *<\/p>\n<p><strong>How it Worked<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>This pitch letter resulted in four assignments:<\/p>\n<ol>\n<li>An article about <a href=\"http:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Palo_Duro_Canyon\">Palo Duro Canyon<\/a> and <a href=\"http:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Caprock_Canyons_State_Park_and_Trailway\">Caprock Canyons<\/a>.<\/li>\n<li>An article about <a href=\"http:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Monahans_Sandhills_State_Park\">Monahans Sandhills State Park<\/a>.<\/li>\n<li>An article about <a href=\"http:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Matagorda_Island\">Matagorda Island<\/a>.<\/li>\n<li>An article about Texas breweries.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<p><strong>Why it Worked<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Again, the letter was short, showing that even though I had a relationship with the editor, I still valued his time.<\/p>\n<p>It also worked because the editor knew he could count on me to deliver the pieces. I worked very hard on the roadside attractions article, so he knew I didn&#8217;t mind getting out there and driving all over Texas to see cool things, research, and take photos.<\/p>\n<p><strong>What Happened?<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>I jumped jobs before a layoff hit me, and the new job sent me to Atlanta for two months during the spring, when the editor needed the articles.<\/p>\n<p>For years, I always put writing before my day job. I thought going to Atlanta would impress my new employer; I thought going to Atlanta would be the <em>right <\/em>thing to do.<\/p>\n<p>Looking back, I have much better memories from the travel articles I&#8217;ve written than from my last job. (And I really liked my last job.) I should have done what was <em>right <\/em>for me: telling the new job I couldn&#8217;t go to Atlanta at the risk of losing the job.<\/p>\n<p>I don&#8217;t have many regrets as a writer, but I <em>do <\/em>regret passing on the four articles and putting work before writing in this instance.<\/p>\n<p><em>The Juggling Writer<\/em> is about juggling work, writing, and life. Using the juggling analogy this blog is based on, passing on these four assignments was my biggest drop as a writer.<\/p>\n<p>But if I&#8217;ve learned nothing else from over 28 years of really juggling, it&#8217;s that <a href=\"http:\/\/www.christophergronlund.com\/blog\/tjw\/2009\/09\/30\/dropping-things\/\">you have to pick things back up<\/a> and keep going.<\/p>\n<p>Assignments like these are always just a query or pitch letter away for anybody willing to do the work.<\/p>\n<p>I hope <a href=\"http:\/\/www.christophergronlund.com\/blog\/tjw\/2010\/01\/20\/queries-that-worked-two-travel-writing-queries\/\">yesterday&#8217;s entry<\/a> and today&#8217;s entry help somebody take a chance to give it a try!<\/p>\n<p><strong>Tomorrow&#8217;s Query<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Tomorrow I&#8217;ll share the query that resulted in an article sale to a <em>Writer&#8217;s Digest<\/em> publication.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Since I had written a couple travel pieces for the Dallas Morning News and finally knew the editor on a first-name basis, I decided to send a pitch letter. 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