{"id":7565,"date":"2019-01-21T08:49:24","date_gmt":"2019-01-21T14:49:24","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.christophergronlund.com\/blog\/tjw\/?p=7565"},"modified":"2019-01-21T08:49:26","modified_gmt":"2019-01-21T14:49:26","slug":"first-drafts","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/www.christophergronlund.com\/blog\/tjw\/2019\/01\/21\/first-drafts\/","title":{"rendered":"First Drafts"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image\"><img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" width=\"800\" height=\"445\" src=\"http:\/\/www.christophergronlund.com\/blog\/tjw\/wp-content\/upLoads\/legos.jpg\" alt=\"Pile of blue LEGOs.\" class=\"wp-image-7567\" srcset=\"http:\/\/www.christophergronlund.com\/blog\/tjw\/wp-content\/upLoads\/legos.jpg 800w, http:\/\/www.christophergronlund.com\/blog\/tjw\/wp-content\/upLoads\/legos-300x167.jpg 300w, http:\/\/www.christophergronlund.com\/blog\/tjw\/wp-content\/upLoads\/legos-768x427.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 800px) 100vw, 800px\" \/><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<p>I&#8217;m not one to make many sweeping proclamations. Anything I write about here always comes with a sense of, <em>&#8220;This is just what works for me, and if it helps others: great!&#8221;<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Like any kind of advice, writing advice can be a hit for some and a miss for others.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>One thing I see touted as a universal truth right up there with, &#8220;You must read to be a writer!&#8221; (which I subscribe to), is &#8220;All first drafts suck!&#8221; (Which I do not subscribe to.)<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\">That&#8217;s a Lot of Words<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>Writers can argue about what constitutes a novel instead of a novella, but even if we all agree anything over 50,000 words is a novel, that&#8217;s a hefty bit of writing. And, obviously, some sections of those first 50,000 words will need to be tightened &#8212; if not completely changed.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>But there are writers who don&#8217;t believe the first draft must be a race to a word count. And I believe some of the writers who say that, while they definitely polish things, the first draft that goes down is largely the completed draft.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>My latest novel, <em>A Magic Life<\/em>, is one such book. I&#8217;d be lying if I said I didn&#8217;t have over 100 notes in Word saying, <em>&#8220;Make better!&#8221;<\/em> but the structure and actions remained unchanged. I polished dialogue and smoothed over what I was getting at in places, but the first draft of <em>A Magic Life<\/em> hardly sucked.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\">A Matter of Pace<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>Perhaps those things that go down well the first time around are subject to pace. For me, I like giving things time to be worked around many ways in my head before committing to writing. (At least with novels &#8212; <a href=\"http:\/\/www.christophergronlund.com\/blog\/tjw\/2018\/12\/27\/fast-fiction\/\">short stories<\/a> can be another thing entirely for me.) For others, they put down words in a mad frenzy and then take it all apart and rebuild (often, multiple times). I&#8217;m not so bold to say my next book will go down as smoothly as my latest.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\">The Next Book<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>There&#8217;s <em>at least<\/em> one more book in the life of the protagonist in <em>A Magic Life<\/em>. And it&#8217;s possible, especially if I don&#8217;t take as much time writing the second book, that some things will be changed around &#8212; that the first draft will  &#8220;suck.&#8221; (I don&#8217;t deal in many absolutes, especially where writing is concerned.)<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Of course, it&#8217;s also possible that it will go down smoothly. (With discipline, confidence, and proficiency, writing <em>does<\/em> get easier in many ways.)<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\">Sometimes the Magic Works&#8230;<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>As a kid, one of my favorite moves was <em><a href=\"https:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Little_Big_Man_(film)\">Little Big Man<\/a><\/em>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>In one of the final scenes, Chief Dan George&#8217;s character, Old Lodge Skins, declares, &#8220;It is a good day to die,&#8221; and ascends a hill in preparation for his end. Instead of dying, though, rain comes and he finds himself alive.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>He tells Dustin Hoffman&#8217;s character, Jack Crabb (Little Big Man), <em>&#8220;Well, sometimes the magic works, sometimes it doesn&#8217;t.&#8221;<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Writing can be like that, with some works going down as if by magic, and others&#8230;not so much.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-embed-youtube wp-block-embed is-type-video is-provider-youtube wp-embed-aspect-16-9 wp-has-aspect-ratio\"><div class=\"wp-block-embed__wrapper\">\n<iframe loading=\"lazy\" width=\"500\" height=\"281\" src=\"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/uLso0ZBqOi4?feature=oembed\" frameborder=\"0\" allow=\"accelerometer; autoplay; encrypted-media; gyroscope; picture-in-picture\" allowfullscreen><\/iframe>\n<\/div><\/figure>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I&#8217;m not one to make many sweeping proclamations. 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