{"id":5634,"date":"2015-01-15T14:51:33","date_gmt":"2015-01-15T20:51:33","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.christophergronlund.com\/blog\/tjw\/?p=5634"},"modified":"2015-01-15T14:51:33","modified_gmt":"2015-01-15T20:51:33","slug":"perfect-writing","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/www.christophergronlund.com\/blog\/tjw\/2015\/01\/15\/perfect-writing\/","title":{"rendered":"Perfect Writing"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><a href=\"http:\/\/www.christophergronlund.com\/blog\/tjw\/wp-content\/upLoads\/calipers.jpg\"><img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-5635\" src=\"http:\/\/www.christophergronlund.com\/blog\/tjw\/wp-content\/upLoads\/calipers.jpg\" alt=\"Calipers\" width=\"800\" height=\"533\" srcset=\"http:\/\/www.christophergronlund.com\/blog\/tjw\/wp-content\/upLoads\/calipers.jpg 800w, http:\/\/www.christophergronlund.com\/blog\/tjw\/wp-content\/upLoads\/calipers-300x200.jpg 300w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 800px) 100vw, 800px\" \/><\/a>I&#8217;ve struggled with the idea of perfection in life.<\/p>\n<p>In juggling, in writing, and other things that mattered to me, I fixated on a perfection I&#8217;m not sure exists. It&#8217;s a nice thought that I can finish a piece of something perfectly before moving on to my next thing, but in my life, I&#8217;ve only witnessed a few moments in 45 years that were &#8220;perfect.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>The thing is, even in those moments, others would not have seen the moments as perfect. What I deem perfect writing &#8212; others have found boring. What others have told me is perfect &#8212; I&#8217;ve seen as terrible. In my own writing, the stories that seem most perfect to me are often those others don&#8217;t see that way; in fact, there have been times I&#8217;ve shown people things I cranked out and knew needed more work, but was told, &#8220;This is perfect! This is the best thing you&#8217;ve ever written!&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>A high school friend (a designer), shared this video on his Facebook page this morning &#8212; I like some of the points made about perfection:<\/p>\n<p><iframe loading=\"lazy\" src=\"\/\/www.youtube.com\/embed\/SVw5e6EYFUg\" width=\"800\" height=\"450\" frameborder=\"0\" allowfullscreen=\"allowfullscreen\"><\/iframe><\/p>\n<h2><strong>Perfect Writing<\/strong><\/h2>\n<p>I can probably call the draft of the novel I&#8217;m currently working on right now done. I could say it&#8217;s a first draft, print it, and start the process of rewriting. But I&#8217;ve given myself a deadline: the end of January. (Initially the end of December, but&#8230;well, that didn&#8217;t happen.) I get two weeks to tinker more and then print it and start the next draft.<\/p>\n<p>It would be easy to keep poring over every page in an effort to be &#8220;perfect,&#8221; but even the best writer plotting everything out ahead of time (unlike me) finds things that didn&#8217;t work out as planned along the way. (No one can anticipate <em>everything<\/em> that will happen over 85,000 &#8211; 100,000+ words.) To spend the time making this draft &#8220;perfect&#8221; would be a waste of my time because &#8212; as stated in the video above &#8212; it means I think I know perfection. I can tighten scenes and make them perfect, but I already know I&#8217;m removing at least one scene I love&#8230;because it seems a bit too much like another scene.<\/p>\n<p>Some would say, &#8220;Cut that scene now and keep at this draft until it&#8217;s perfect,&#8221; but I&#8217;m not prepared to spend a decade obsessing over every detail about this book. To think that even in a lifetime that this book would ever be perfect is kidding myself. It&#8217;s already good, and I believe I&#8217;ve worked hard enough writing other novels that this can be great. But it will not be perfect. It already has perfect moments, but it will never be wholly perfect.<\/p>\n<h2><strong>The Funny Thing about Novels<\/strong><\/h2>\n<p>I&#8217;m going to win the Captain Obvious award, here: novels are big things full of many ideas and events. I can look at my own novels and see where pacing and jumps can be tightened &#8212; and I can do that with my all-time favorite novels. John Irving&#8217;s <em>A Prayer for Owen Meany<\/em> is a wonderful book, but you know what? It&#8217;s not perfect. I&#8217;d go as far as saying it&#8217;s almost <em>ruined<\/em> by Irving&#8217;s narrator talking about politics that have nothing to do with the story. (Politics I agree with, but still&#8230;Irving&#8217;s personal rantings took away from something wonderful.)<\/p>\n<p>I wrote about Anthony Doerr&#8217;s <a title=\"My Favorite Book(s) of the Year\" href=\"http:\/\/www.christophergronlund.com\/blog\/tjw\/2014\/12\/30\/my-favorite-books-of-the-year\/\"><em>All the Light We Cannot See<\/em><\/a> at the end of 2014 and admitted that there are two places it stumbled for me&#8230;and this is a book that I really might put into my top 10 of all-time lists. It&#8217;s <em>almost<\/em> perfect! That said, it is not without its negative reviews. I think the last &#8220;perfect&#8221; book I read was Robin Sloan&#8217;s <em>Mr. Penumbra&#8217;s 24-Hour Bookstore<\/em>, but <em>All the Light We Cannot See<\/em> is the better book. (And that&#8217;s saying a lot, &#8217;cause I love <em>Mr. Penumbra&#8217;s 24-Hour Bookstore<\/em> &#8212; I <em>like<\/em> it more than <em>All the Light We Cannot See<\/em> and almost every other book I&#8217;ve read in the last decade. But I&#8217;ve read plenty of <em>better<\/em> books in the last decade.)<\/p>\n<p>Still&#8230;even the few novels I see as perfect&#8230;others would say, &#8220;How can you even <em>like<\/em> that book, let alone say it&#8217;s better than [insert other favorite books, here]?&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>If writing <em>could<\/em> be perfect, we would unanimously agree that some book is flawless&#8230;but we will never do that as a species. Knowing that, it seems like the best idea is to shoot for &#8220;The best this book can be in a certain amount of time I am willing to work on it.&#8221;Going back to the video above, I agree:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>Done is better than perfect.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>Even though I still have a couple weeks with the current draft of the novel I&#8217;m working on to try&#8230;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I&#8217;ve struggled with the idea of perfection in life. In juggling, in writing, and other things that mattered to me, I fixated on a perfection I&#8217;m not sure exists. 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